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Dem Alptraum Herr werden by Konsumo Dem Alptraum Herr werden by Konsumo
Some thoughts brought to life.

Done for a rpg.

As so many people enjoyed the piece, I'll try to translate the text. It's about a character named Fierce. He recently had an encounter with some dark demonic creature and got bitten. This work illustrates his thoughts and emotions, interfering with his normally very organized way of thinking. As I wrote it down, I tried to phrase it like hasty thoughts are phrased: short, emotional, intense and chaotic.

Translated text:

Darkness, darkness that took shape.
Like a demon, a beast formed out of pure
spite, this big cheese, this gangland boss
unleashed to get me.

It bit me...brutally..remorseless,
my blood trickling down its fangs.

(now it's getting tricky as I'm starting to mix lines and the text gets more chaotic. It's harder to read but now you can read it in more way than one as a visualization of thoughts messing and interfering with each other)

I was weakened, barely able to conceive what was happening ... not able to move
I was weakened, barely able to think straight

I was frozen in terror, paralyzed.
It was not only the pain...there was something else creeping into my mind, poisoning and overgrowing my thoughts.

(single words (emotions) obscure the otherwise solid path of the line above - Rage, fear, numbness, despair, hate, agony, chaos)

(The following words are not fully written, parts of the letters are missing)

Thoughts..... become... unsteady.... blurry...

(from now on there are three main thought processes wrestling in his mind for dominance)

1. (the words start very small and become bigger and bigger as if he would cry them out)! Help! HELP! .....
Help me...please....somebody...

2. (the words become increasingly sketchy and expressive)

Chaos....Cha....os....Fear...Fear!..Fear! No! Fear!

3. (to the right...becoming more stable and back to normal, as if he's starting to wrestle the panic down)

It's....tearing me apart....
Bring order..Fierce order

order. are stronger than...
...stronger than...

...the darkness.
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Given 2012-11-20
Dem Alptraum Herr werden by ~Konsumo is a great emotional piece of hand-drawn typography. Even tho it is written in German, you can feel the nightmare by looking at the words and how they look. ( Suggested by Rutana and Featured by pica-ae )
realdry Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
AkashasDreamworld Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Es hat wirklich gut funktioniert. Dafür, dass du noch experimentierst finde ich hast du einen super tollen Job gemacht! Die Verwendung der verschiedenen Schriftarten hätte ich jetzt nicht jemandem zugeordnet der noch experimentiert. (: Ich finde das sieht wirklich professionell aus und es ist, wie ich sagte, super gelungen! :dummy:
Konsumo Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ich wollte genau diesen Effekt erzielen. Noch experimentiere ich mit dieser Art zu schreiben/zu zeichnen, aber ich bin froh zu sehen, dass es offenbar schon recht gut funktioniert. :)
Konsumo Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hab vielen Dank! Solch ein Kompliment höre ich nicht nur gern, es spornt auch ungemein an.
Communist-Love-Song Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Student Filmographer
Amazing use of space with the words and what clean, lovely inkwork. Brilliant, and congratulations on the Daily Deviation!
northsaare Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's gorgeous!
joeltonongkh Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
splendid execution and typeface.
crashmypartyhard Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
what a haunting piece. love the handwriting and the way you arranged the writing so it gave more depth and effect.
8BitStitchPunk Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Dark and haunting. I love it!
One-eyeHitomi Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Beautiful language that is German, and you used it well. congrats! X3
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